Group Pitch of our ideas

Here we did a group pitch which was the treatment we were pitching our ideas to the class and getting feedback from them telling us about our idea and how we can improve it in anyway. we were told to improve the narrative and make it more planned out in terms of who will do what and when, some of our ideas didn't come across very well to the class so we would have to improve on what we are going to do lyric from lyric. As the chorus is repetitive we would have to do a lot of scenes to make it more exciting so more dancing and more cuts at a fast rate because the song is fast pace so this allows the audience to engage with the music and also the video. We would have to plan this out very well because the song does not have a set choreography so the dancers would have to create something with the song so we would have to ask them in advance and plan extras really well. The party scene is just gonna be a small gathering with the Chris brown actor and the girl he is talking to at the front talking and him singing to her basically this is where they meet and then a new scene would be where they are just having fun maybe him dancing for her as Chris brown does dance in majority of his videos, we were thinking maybe just a scene with the Chris brown actor and some of his boys dancing with him if the Chris brown actor is a dancer and we can get backup dancer maybe a dance routine from them.